Just a side note: you made two consecutive posts that were exactly 25 seconds apart. We're nice here, but most places consider that spamming. C'mon, man, you should know better. It's one thing if you're updating a running thread that's been neglected a while and you've got some kind of milestone update... then if you happen to have had the last post nobody'll give you guff. But 25 seconds?
Anyway, sorry I can't give you a bit more time/critique on the poetry. I read over a bit, but I've just been super busy... don't have much time for that stuff these days. Got 200-something submissions on DA to catch up on which will never happen... arg. Anyway, all I can continue to suggest (pretty sure I suggested it last time we talked about this stuff) is that you read more poetry. It's never a bad thing, and I think you can tell a poet who doesn't read poetry from a poet who reads a lot pretty quickly. Doesn't mean the one who doesn't is *bad* necessarily, but there are things you can pick up on in their poetry which delineate areas of weakness more quickly and obviously. So yeah, sorry I can't give you much feedback, but keep writing! And read some, too (which I mention mostly because you once told me you don't, so I'm going to keep beating it into your head that you should!)!
