Man you are cranking stuff out, I'm happy you're making so much progress. I dig this song as well, my only complaint is the music drowns out your vocals a little bit, but you've already explained why that is and it's not that big of a deal, the instrumentals are awesome enough on their own to warrant that small problem. My music folder named "Que" grows in size, it hungers for more.
Everyone else on the boards needs to listen to your stuff, especially some of the other people here who enjoy metal. Make comments you bastards!