Author Topic: MyD Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poem Added - "The Escape Artist's Failure"  (Read 11429 times)

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I'm gonna update this first piece of this thread, from now on, when I add new poems and stuff.


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Here's the URL for my DeviantArt, for my poetry and whatnot...if you all wanna' take a look-see at some MyD Poetry


Feb 4, 2008 Post *NEW!*
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The Escape Artist's Failure

June 22th, 2007 Post
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The Radiation I've Been Facing

June 18th, 2007 Post
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Daily Reoccurring Thoughts
The Butterfly Lives

June 11th, 2007 Post
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I Finally Dreamt Of You

May 3rd, 2007 Post
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Reign of Doom
Surrounded By Darkness
Quicksand of Love
Beyond Repair


April 11th, 2007 Post
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(Ten Lines Of) Sadness
Trying To Overcome Love's Obstacles
Surreal Rain

March 2nd, 2007 Post
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The Shell And The Soul

Original Post
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I just added 4 old ones, which I wrote some time back....
The Remnants Of Love
Beat Of Love
Inevitable Destruction
Caught In A Time Loop
« Last Edit: Monday, February 04, 2008, 07:01:30 PM by MysterD »

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Re: MyD And His Poetry -- FOUR MyD Poems Released
« Reply #1 on: Tuesday, February 27, 2007, 08:26:30 AM »
Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?

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Re: MyD And His Poetry -- FOUR MyD Poems Released
« Reply #2 on: Tuesday, February 27, 2007, 02:18:41 PM »
Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?

No their very linear line after line of dialogue and none of it was voiced  :P

No I did read two of them, their pretty good.

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Re: MyD And His Poetry -- FOUR MyD Poems Released
« Reply #3 on: Thursday, March 01, 2007, 04:46:04 PM »
Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?

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Re: MyD And His Poetry -- FOUR MyD Poems Released
« Reply #4 on: Thursday, March 01, 2007, 04:46:29 PM »

No I did read two of them, their pretty good.
Thanks, bro. :)
Much appreciated

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Re: MyD And His Poetry -- FOUR MyD Poems Released
« Reply #5 on: Thursday, March 01, 2007, 06:54:12 PM »
Just a side note: you made two consecutive posts that were exactly 25 seconds apart.  We're nice here, but most places consider that spamming.  C'mon, man, you should know better.  It's one thing if you're updating a running thread that's been neglected a while and you've got some kind of milestone update... then if you happen to have had the last post nobody'll give you guff.  But 25 seconds?

Anyway, sorry I can't give you a bit more time/critique on the poetry.  I read over a bit, but I've just been super busy... don't have much time for that stuff these days.  Got 200-something submissions on DA to catch up on which will never happen... arg.  Anyway, all I can continue to suggest (pretty sure I suggested it last time we talked about this stuff) is that you read more poetry.  It's never a bad thing, and I think you can tell a poet who doesn't read poetry from a poet who reads a lot pretty quickly.  Doesn't mean the one who doesn't is *bad* necessarily, but there are things you can pick up on in their poetry which delineate areas of weakness more quickly and obviously.  So yeah, sorry I can't give you much feedback, but keep writing!  And read some, too (which I mention mostly because you once told me you don't, so I'm going to keep beating it into your head that you should!)!

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Re: MyD And His Poetry THREAD
« Reply #6 on: Friday, March 02, 2007, 06:18:32 PM »
Just a side note: you made two consecutive posts that were exactly 25 seconds apart.  We're nice here, but most places consider that spamming.  C'mon, man, you should know better.  It's one thing if you're updating a running thread that's been neglected a while and you've got some kind of milestone update... then if you happen to have had the last post nobody'll give you guff.  But 25 seconds?
I should know better. My bad, bro.

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Anyway, sorry I can't give you a bit more time/critique on the poetry.  I read over a bit, but I've just been super busy... don't have much time for that stuff these days.  Got 200-something submissions on DA to catch up on which will never happen... arg.  Anyway, all I can continue to suggest (pretty sure I suggested it last time we talked about this stuff) is that you read more poetry.  It's never a bad thing, and I think you can tell a poet who doesn't read poetry from a poet who reads a lot pretty quickly.  Doesn't mean the one who doesn't is *bad* necessarily, but there are things you can pick up on in their poetry which delineate areas of weakness more quickly and obviously.  So yeah, sorry I can't give you much feedback, but keep writing!  And read some, too (which I mention mostly because you once told me you don't, so I'm going to keep beating it into your head that you should!)!
Thanks for the advice, bro. :)
MyD appreciates it.

And just so I don't start a new post in this thread some 25 seconds later here, new poem:
The Shell And The Soul

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MysterD's poetry thread.
« Reply #7 on: Wednesday, April 11, 2007, 06:40:13 PM »
New MyD Poem; click below!

The Sadness Lingers

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MysterD's poetry thread.
« Reply #8 on: Monday, April 16, 2007, 04:40:04 PM »
Brand new MyD Poetry!!!
(Ten Lines Of) Sadness

Some Unreleased MyD Poetry (well, Unreleased until now....)
Trying To Overcome Love's Obstacles
Surreal Rain
« Last Edit: Monday, April 16, 2007, 05:14:41 PM by MysterD »

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MyD Poetry Madness -- Four new poems from MyD Himself
« Reply #9 on: Thursday, May 03, 2007, 05:54:19 PM »

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Re: MyD Poetry Madness -- Four new poems from MyD Himself
« Reply #10 on: Friday, May 04, 2007, 12:59:11 PM »
Can't you just... you know, put all your poems into one thread. This is the fourth MyD poetry mania super deluxe madness thread.

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Re: MyD Poetry Madness -- Four new poems from MyD Himself
« Reply #11 on: Friday, May 04, 2007, 04:01:14 PM »
Can't you just... you know, put all your poems into one thread. This is the fourth MyD poetry mania super deluxe madness thread.

If the mods want to (since I don't have that power), they can merge them all -- if there's no problem w/ them doing that.
That'd be definitely fine w/ MyD.

I can then put it all in one super MyD deluxe thread....YEAH!!!

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Re: MyD Poetry Madness -- Four new poems from MyD Himself
« Reply #12 on: Friday, May 04, 2007, 06:14:34 PM »
If you find the links for me I'll mod 'em up when I get the chance later tonight.  And yeah, the art board gets enough traffic now that we can really start trying to consolidate.  I used to do a thread for each of my poems just because the art board saw no action like at all, so... now we can just keep project threads going instead.  Seems to be the latest trend.  So link me your other threads D and I'll merge them when I get back from Sy's.

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Re: MyD Poetry Madness -- Four new poems from MyD Himself
« Reply #13 on: Friday, May 04, 2007, 07:39:44 PM »
Here's the other 3 threads you can merge w/ this one I'm posting this reply right here in....

Thread Number 1

Thread Number 2

Thread Number 3


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Re: MyD And His Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poems Added
« Reply #14 on: Saturday, May 05, 2007, 11:45:47 AM »
Merged and merged.  Let me know if I missed anything.

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Re: MyD And His Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poems Added
« Reply #15 on: Sunday, May 06, 2007, 06:21:04 PM »
Merged and merged.  Let me know if I missed anything.
Thanks for everything.
You miss'd nothing, bro.

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Re: MyD Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poem Added; "I Finally Dreamt Of You"
« Reply #17 on: Monday, June 18, 2007, 05:30:38 PM »
New MyD Poetry and all.
Daily Reoccurring Thoughts

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Re: MyD Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poem Added; "Daily Reoccurring Thoughts
« Reply #18 on: Wednesday, June 20, 2007, 03:40:27 PM »
Recurring.

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Re: MyD Poetry THREAD -- UPDATE: NEW MyD Poem Added - "The Escape Artist's Failu
« Reply #19 on: Monday, February 04, 2008, 07:03:00 PM »
New poetry from MyD today.

The Escape Artist's Failure