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Novel project #4 is underway.
« on: Sunday, October 21, 2007, 04:28:16 PM »
Planning to get it going in full swing for November, when I again take part in NaNoWriMo.  So far have been roughing out characters, working on some background stuff, and coming up with a working locale for the book's (IMO) pretty damned unique premise.  This also entails doing a little mapwork, which I began by hand just on plain paper.

Two days' work produced this.  I've since finished it, but can't be bothered to upload the final version unless somebody actually cares (doubtful).

Now I'm thinking I may go digital and try to work it out using InkScape.  Hmm.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #1 on: Sunday, October 21, 2007, 04:31:26 PM »
Is another novel or are you refining Black further?  Either way I'm interested, keep me updated.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #2 on: Sunday, October 21, 2007, 04:46:13 PM »
Well, the Black manuscript is nearly finished.  I'm in the final stages, but it's getting put on hold to do NaNo again.  That's really what it comes down to.  Chances are it'll end up being the first officially completed project, and the first thing that I attempt to get published.

This new one is brand-new.  Basically everything I write has at this point found its way into the current mythos I've been nurturing for a while, so you can expect there to be tie-ins of varying degrees... but yeah, it's new.  And for the basic premise to be "deciphered" by "fans", I'll probably have to put this one out much later in terms of publication.  Unless I don't care whether or not they understand the basic premise, and leave it for them to figure out later after several other books come out.  We'll see.  It's really a self-contained story, but the mechanics of certain things would be totally overlooked by most people unless they had some exposure to them previously.  Or something.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #3 on: Monday, October 22, 2007, 02:03:09 AM »
I appreciate your mountain names.

I fully intend to do NaNo again this year. Never finished last year, but I was proud of what I wrote and intend to work on it some more eventually.
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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #4 on: Monday, October 22, 2007, 06:50:25 AM »
Awesome.  I may or may not do the ML thing this year.  They wanted me last year, but I don't know if they'll remember.  If so, fine... if not, I'll be lazy and avoid the extra work.    :-[

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #5 on: Thursday, November 01, 2007, 05:59:43 PM »
So what's your first line? Mine's "It was often said that Peter Jones was a curious man".
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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #6 on: Thursday, November 01, 2007, 09:44:55 PM »
I forgot I even made this thread, haha.

My first line is: "The wandering man moved slowly down the pathway before him."  The scenario is a great deal more interesting than the first sentence would have you believe.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #7 on: Thursday, November 01, 2007, 09:55:39 PM »
Good, because I totally thought the book was going to suck from that first sentence.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #8 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 10:18:53 AM »
Dan, link me to your profile and stuff at NaNo.  I tried to find you but they took down the author search and a bunch of other stuff to help keep the site from imploding, which it did last night anyway.

This be me.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #9 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 10:57:43 AM »
If I was writing a book, my first line would be: "No sooner had Spike set his minigun down on the bar of the stripclub than the zombies started pouring in through every window."

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #10 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 01:00:14 PM »
Why not go from there?  Do an action horror book!

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #11 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 01:07:29 PM »
I can barely spell, let alone come up with some sort of interesting story and write a freaking novel.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #12 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 04:24:41 PM »
Zombies do not require spelling.  And if you have people fighting off zombies, story just happens.  Trust me.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #13 on: Sunday, November 04, 2007, 05:35:11 PM »
If I was writing a book, my first line would be: "No sooner had Spike set his minigun down on the bar of the stripclub than the zombies started pouring in through every window."

Now that's a great first line!

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #14 on: Monday, August 11, 2008, 01:20:34 AM »
Take an audio tour of the city with no name, and if you like, I can be your guide.  You can thank an assload of my free time over the latter part of this week and the weekend, and a whole host of people over at freesound.org, without whom this would not have been possible in any way, shape, or form.  They are as follows:

Spandau, dobroide, icmusic, A43, sdfalk, martypinso, stomachache, Heigh-hoo, Marec, acclivity, Walter_Odington, markystar, massi_1130, eyecandyuk, morewaves, shewbox, audiblepie.com, Capuchin, reinsamba, fabe, ingeos, abinadimeza, mystiscool, jakeharries, Humphries, pcaeldries, patchen, mr chips, decembered, cognito perceptu, and duckyboy80.

I can guide you with words and let you know what you're hearing, but do feel welcome to just kick back, absorb the sounds, and build the world in your own head as you go along.  Or enjoy the white noise just for the sake of it.

This basically started as me messing with some sound effects hoping to create a few good rain loops.  I love the sound of rain, and we got none this year.  Northern California is pretty much in a drought right now, and we're all on water restriction.  But as I began realizing just how much more really incredible stuff is on The Freesound Project now, I thought maybe I could do a little better than just that.  And as I went, a whole different idea came into my head, which is what you're now hearing.  I also have ideas for it that could extend beyond just this, but you know... a step at a time.

This MP3 clocks in at just over a half hour and was built from the ground up from samples, 100% recorded material supplied to me by the freesound.org community (and a few others I hacked together on my own from other sources).  Ultimately, 54 samples from freesound.org were used, which resulted in more than 130 individual files that were used to construct the soundscapes of various "scenes", including background chatter, music, bits that were entirely atmospheric or tonal, and most importantly, the various and ever-changing textures of the rain as it collides with concrete, metal, and earth.  After all was said and done, the burden gifted my hard drive a database of almost 5GB of raw audio data.

So, if you have any desire to just zone out for a while, take the tour.  This isn't action-packed, mind you, because it isn't meant to be.  It's more or less a tool I'm using to help myself get centered within a project, so it might be a little too "zen" to be of interest to some of you.





00:00 -

Back to the wall of a small cafe on Haake in Little Ireland, which comprises roughly one third of the city's downtown area.  A garbage truck is doing its rounds at all hours of the night, waking up everyone the way it always does.

00:50 -

Moving west down the street, passing a variety of small shops and cafes.

02:00 -

A lot of closed hotdog stands and newpaper stalls which are locked up for the night.  Not much going on in this part of town, as this stretch of Haake is relatively dead (unlike further east, where you can find the Polish Ambassador and Warsaw Reclamation Hall).

04:50 -

The Brendan Stout, a quiet enough bar.  Not a lot of punks hang out there despite it being in a somewhat lackluster part of town right across from a train yard where they repair some of the city subway trains.  It's warm and the drinks are worth what you pay for them.  The bell from the clock tower rings eleven.

06:30 -

Hollis Street.  Drunks are everywhere this far north on Hollis as there are lots of good bars.  A man playing an accordion walks by, and trust me, you don't want to talk to him.  He doesn't speak English anyway.  A block or two down Hollis, heading south to Little Ireland Drive, and we can go west again, past the back of the hospital.  Then we can pass Third Street, moving diagonally across to the southwest.

8:00 -

There's trash strewn about.  Mucking around behind some buildings gets us into Fuse by the back way.  The subway goes by, which isn't so far above us.  Through some soft ground and a tree-lined walk nets us Fuse, a decent place for billiards if you don't go the main club.  But the billiards room isn't the best place for a drink unless you like your bars anonymous and dark enough to hide in.  West out the side door, brushing past a drunken Brit playing 8-ball, and we're on the street again.

Crossing Kumiko and winding quickly around Ume Street gets us out of the heavy rain.

12:20 -

Miyazaki, a noodle joint, is at the end of the street.  The place is pretty dead at this hour, but there are a couple of drunk Asian girls chatting amongst themselves.  What else do you come to Japantown for, anyway?  The rain comes and goes.

16:45 -

Southward again, crossing Hououji via a covered crosswalk.  The rain has died down a little.  Once across, the fish market, which is in full swing despite the late hour.  One of the more popular sellers has a counter full of extremely enthusiastic employees.  Doubling back north again past some busier cafes and the ever-popular House Kitsune, we then cut north through Kitsune's alley, across Kumiko, and north again past Spiegel Market.  From here we can get to the Roman Cancel, the only place around to feature pachinko, and the only real arcade left in the city.

21:30 -

The elevated subway train rolls to a stop overhead, prematurely.  Probably a problem with the track.  It isn't an uncommon occurrence.  The Roman Cancel, then a neighboring cafe that's part of a little covered strip mall.  It's a humid night, so all the doors are open everywhere.

26:00 -

Down through the strip mall, passing another lively place, and then walking past the Crater on our way southwest, a leviathan of a vertical structure that sits just across the street, extending high up into the sky along the side of the even-taller Mount Shigeru, and far below into the geographical anomaly from which it got its name.  Several of the bars and restaurants that cling to the skeletal structure cast their noises across.  Eventually, we find the elevator that will take us to the nearby elevated subway platform.  A short ride up, then into the train.





So there you have it.  No idea if anyone else will find it worth listening to, but I thoroughly enjoyed making it.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #15 on: Monday, August 11, 2008, 10:43:44 AM »
That must have taken a lot of effort.  I'm about 5 minutes into it now.  Great job of blending from one "area" to another.

Haha.  "Lara's Theme" on accordion.

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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #16 on: Monday, August 11, 2008, 07:01:12 PM »
Nothing like a little Zhivago to brighten your day!

EDIT - Funny, I found this today when talking with idol.  I'd sort of forgotten about posting it to DA, and a little surprised to check back on the original post of this thread and notice that I didn't include it.

Anyway, that's where the inspiration for the novel came from.  I thought I began working on the book maybe 5 or 6 years after the poem, but in fact, if I posted the poem to DA in 2003, I know I wrote it a good while before ever posting it, so it was likely closer to 7 or 8 years before I got the inspiration to make a novel of it.  Funny, that.  It's a deeply personal project, as you may or may not be able to guess from reading the poem (though the book is far more personally detailed than anything I've ever written, poem or otherwise, and the depth of this unfortunately can't be revealed until well after several other books have been published, if this is to fall into place the way I've planned it), and I again surprise myself reading over it again, because I didn't realize how many concepts from the poem I actually pulled over to the book.  The poem is singsongy and has the feeling of a fable or storybook somehow, but the novel is... well, not so much like that.  Not necessarily the absolute antithesis, but certainly with a different scope and weight and sharpness of fictional detail.

It'll be interesting when somebody else gets to read it.
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Re: Novel project #4 is underway.
« Reply #17 on: Wednesday, August 20, 2008, 12:04:13 AM »
Can I be in it?  Can I be like Batman in it?

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« Reply #18 on: Wednesday, August 20, 2008, 12:07:15 AM »
Yes.  Yes you can.

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« Reply #19 on: Wednesday, August 20, 2008, 11:03:56 PM »
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