Author Topic: NEED INPUT (Read 16780 times)

Ghandi · « **on:** Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:09:13 PM »

I've been working on a drawing for awhile now and I just can't finish it. Something is missing. I need some input (honest input, don't just tell me that it is good). What is missing? What can I do to improve it? Feel free to download it and add what you feel is necessary if you wish.

Link

I'm going to give this to a girl so please I need to make it the best that it can be.

Quemaqua · « **Reply #1 on:** Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:28:03 PM »

It needs a guy standing out front, shouting obscenities.

Ghandi · « **Reply #2 on:** Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:36:17 PM »

Excellent, thank you. Masterpiece 2.0

But it is still missing something...

Pugnate · « **Reply #3 on:** Sunday, March 14, 2010, 11:43:18 PM »

It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.

Ghandi · « **Reply #4 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 12:03:29 AM »

Quote from: Pugnate on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 11:43:18 PM

It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.

3.0

Better, but not there yet.

Pugnate · « **Reply #5 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 02:15:10 AM »

hahah I meant to write monkey...

Quemaqua · « **Reply #6 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 07:29:21 AM »

haha, I think the money was the way to go, truly.

ScaryTooth · « **Reply #7 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 08:14:36 PM »

I think you need a couple of flowers in the grass over there. And maybe a bear or a shark. Or better yet, a sea bear, or a grizzly shark.

Ghandi · « **Reply #8 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:23:16 PM »

Good ideas, but still needs work.

4.0

Edit: My bear-shark makes me happy

Pugnate · « **Reply #9 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:59:56 PM »

hehhe that bear shark looks awesome

edit:

I meant it.

Quemaqua · « **Reply #10 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:37:57 PM »

Haha, bear-shark! Idol, t-shirt designs, pronto!

sirean_syan · « **Reply #11 on:** Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:53:21 PM »

Needs more spikes.

And hookers.

scottws · « **Reply #12 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 05:42:02 AM »

Haha this is classic!

Ghandi · « **Reply #13 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:16:23 PM »

Quote from: sirean_syan on Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:53:21 PM

Needs more spikes.

And hookers.

Version 5.0. The spikes will have to be incorporated later.

Still needs work....

And sorry Pyro, you just happen to be the only hooker that I know.

idolminds · « **Reply #14 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:33:08 PM »

Damn, I just googled "bearshark" and I have been beaten to the photoshop punch.

I think the house needs to be more exciting, and there needs to be more wildlife. Perhaps a family of beavers lives there. And one wears a top hat.

angrykeebler · « **Reply #15 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:37:16 PM »

Needs some asians

Ghandi · « **Reply #16 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:55:34 PM »

6.0

Added gun turrets on the house and a "GTFO" welcome mat to spice things up, along with your other requests.

Quemaqua · « **Reply #17 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 07:40:14 PM »

Haha, we really need to start a fucking OWnet thread hall of fame, man.

angrykeebler · « **Reply #18 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:30:08 PM »

the crop of asians look like aliens lol

Pugnate · « **Reply #19 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:41:38 PM »

hahaha they do look like aliens from South Park.

Maybe Ghandi is trying to say something.

Pugnate · « **Reply #20 on:** Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:52:27 PM »

OK I'd like to see Schrödinger's Cat jumping on Wind&Confusion's head, as he is trying to direct a group of Asian slaves into painting the Sistine Chapel's artwork on to Gabe Newell's corpse.

PyroMenace · « **Reply #21 on:** Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 12:23:54 AM »

I guess I'll play my archetype. Something needs to be on fire.

Ghandi · « **Reply #22 on:** Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 11:42:56 AM »

Quote from: angrykeebler on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:30:08 PM

the crop of asians look like aliens lol

ITS YOUR CROP, LEARN 2 GROW

Version 7.0

The new addition represents both suggestions from Pug and Pyro.

gpw11 · « **Reply #23 on:** Friday, March 19, 2010, 06:23:20 PM »

Ahaha.

You just reminded me of the Deviant Art account I created to promote "notebook simplistic" art. You know, before I promptly forgot about it.

Quemaqua · « **Reply #24 on:** Friday, March 19, 2010, 09:35:03 PM »

Haha, damn, I remember that. That was beautiful.

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Author Topic: NEED INPUT (Read 16780 times)